I thought you chose a very good song with a good meaning. With the music however I did not think it fit very well with the meaning and song its self. Though it was a good choice so well done!
Hi, I think that the majority of the pictures fitted really well with the song and its meaning, but I really think the music did not fit with the song because to me it didn't fit with the meaning and mood of the song, also when you changed the music it didn't fit and made it sound even worse.So I think you should have used slower music with no words in it so it fitted the mood and song lyrics. I did like the fact that you could see all the words in every single slide, also that you put a title slide and a end slide. Overall it was pretty average because the music let it down, but was an improvement from your last one :)
Some of your pictures suit, but some of them don't so much. I don't know if you chose them because there wasn't a good variety or what, but it might help if you searched for different keywords in each line, and also sometimes synonyms of those words as well. Also, your music doesn't fit too well in my opinion, as it is a bit of a romantic song, so on the youtube audio library you should have narrowed by mood: romantic or something like that. If your song isn't long enough, rather than putting in a different song you could just repeat the first song. Are you sure you couldn't find a more meaningful song than that? To me, the song doesn't seem to have a very important message.
I think if you have heard the song before like I have then the music sounds so weird with the lyrics. If I hadn't heard the lyrics before than I might think differently. I think the song did not suit at all and the second song even less the pictures made sense but it repeated them so much.
I thought you chose a very good song with a good meaning. With the music however I did not think it fit very well with the meaning and song its self. Though it was a good choice so well done!
ReplyDeleteHi, I think that the majority of the pictures fitted really well with the song and its meaning, but I really think the music did not fit with the song because to me it didn't fit with the meaning and mood of the song, also when you changed the music it didn't fit and made it sound even worse.So I think you should have used slower music with no words in it so it fitted the mood and song lyrics. I did like the fact that you could see all the words in every single slide, also that you put a title slide and a end slide. Overall it was pretty average because the music let it down, but was an improvement from your last one :)
ReplyDeleteSome of your pictures suit, but some of them don't so much. I don't know if you chose them because there wasn't a good variety or what, but it might help if you searched for different keywords in each line, and also sometimes synonyms of those words as well. Also, your music doesn't fit too well in my opinion, as it is a bit of a romantic song, so on the youtube audio library you should have narrowed by mood: romantic or something like that. If your song isn't long enough, rather than putting in a different song you could just repeat the first song. Are you sure you couldn't find a more meaningful song than that? To me, the song doesn't seem to have a very important message.
ReplyDeleteI think if you have heard the song before like I have then the music sounds so weird with the lyrics. If I hadn't heard the lyrics before than I might think differently. I think the song did not suit at all and the second song even less the pictures made sense but it repeated them so much.
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